Walt: write narrative using descriptive language.
Once upon a time there was an insect called Spike. Spike was a spiky insect. It has superpowers it can transforms into a sun or a lighting bolt. There was a spider named Striker. Striker was fast and could also be invisible. No other insect couldn't see it.
Once upon a time there was an insect called Spike. Spike was a spiky insect. It has superpowers it can transforms into a sun or a lighting bolt. There was a spider named Striker. Striker was fast and could also be invisible. No other insect couldn't see it.
When Spike meet Striker they looked like they were going to be friends. But Striker tried to bite Spike. Spike dodged him, but Striker just kept trying to bite him. Spike comes back a sting's the spider's head.
Spike was so happy and did a victory dance.
task discretion. we are learning about fighting insects and spiders.
The end
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